Laephis wrote:Then something happened to Jordan, some kind of "greed machine" kicked in and he started dragging things out for as long as he could. He started adding more and more characters into his story that you just didn't care about. He would spend entire chapters that would go nowhere and tell you nothing AT ALL. He started filling it with expressions that will drive you nuts...how many times do I need to hear that so-and-so "pulled their braids" or "smoothed their skirts?"
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