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First Kiss

Postby Adonis on Mon Sep 22, 2003 5:42 am

Trying to sleep yet drifting eyes closing
Deep breath drinking in your scent
As it flows over me fills me with thoughts
Eyes tightly holding not wanting to open

My thoughts filled with dreams
My body throbbing, tongue searching
Caressing the sweet taste of you
Alone you and I holding one another tightly

Your warmth against me my soul
Begins to spin slowly I surrender
Looking upon the beauty of you
My mind flowing as a raging river

My heart screaming in delight
Our embrace, the passion thrilling
And running in a hectic flight
Should I surrender totally as we
Taste each others sweet wine

Slowly I crumble my heart irretrievably
Clings to yours holding you with my arms
Under the rain as the moon shines upon us
Our cries whispering loudly amongst the stars

Tears flow down my face like tiny rivers to the sea
A fantasy – this be the love that crushes me
The emptiness ripping out my heart
A gentle breeze covers my sweating body

My breath coming in short sharp pains
Be not afraid to open they eyes
Truthfully your exquisite form standing over me
My fears and wounds crumble with your touches

Your scent covers me with our First Kiss


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Postby Jocilyn on Wed Sep 24, 2003 4:22 am

Very Pretty :)
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Postby Adonis on Wed Sep 24, 2003 5:23 am

Hail m'lady Jocilyn
Thank you for that, I am very happy you liked it.
Not many post on my poems so I not know if they
like or not.
*bows*
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