Dark Wind, Chapter 9 and Bonus Friday Chapter 10

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Dark Wind, Chapter 9 and Bonus Friday Chapter 10

Postby Atei on Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:31 pm

Chapter 9

Without hesitating or even looking at the wreckage in the rest of home, Amon took the steps two at a time and was quickly standing in his bedroom doorway. He saw Pau, sitting on the floor, covered in soot, hair singed, knees drawn close with his arms around them, rocking back and forth and sobbing. It was only then that Amon even noticed the rain.

“Pau?â€
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Postby Wolfie on Sat Apr 17, 2004 2:31 pm

*waits for the next part* :)
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Waiting

Postby Kronos Leir on Sat Apr 17, 2004 4:25 pm

I love to read this story.

Are you doing 1 chapter a week or what?
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Postby Atei on Sat Apr 17, 2004 4:42 pm

Approximately. Sometimes I get tied up with my business and other real life stuff and it gets set aside.
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Postby Kronos Leir on Sat Apr 17, 2004 7:34 pm

Ok just checking :D
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