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Is this Love?

PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2004 6:49 am
by Henry Longshanks
He looks down at her once again as they cuddle on the couch. Each time he looks she seems to get even more beautiful. Her hair feels of the finest silk. Her eyes shine like the night sky. Her touch is that of a heavenly maidens. She notices his loving gaze and stares up into his eyes. In that gaze they are no longer two entities, but one joined by love. They are in a world of their own, lost to all else, and they care not for the troubles around them. "Is this Love?" he thinks to himself. He risks a kiss, and is rewarded with one of the most passionate moments of his life. Yes, this is love, a love that will never falter. The kiss ends, and they are both dizzy with their love for each other. He continues to stare into her eyes, for he does not want this moment to end. He knows it must end sometime, he must return to the "real world." But the "real world" can wait. For now, they shall stay in that little world of theirs, caught up in the love they have for each other. The world around them fades, along with all their worries and doubts. Tomorrow may come, but today there is only pure bliss.

PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2004 5:41 pm
by dione
This was a very sweet and lovely entry. I think at one point in time every single person has these same feelings. Keep the stories coming I enjoy reading them.

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 4:31 am
by Henry Longshanks
Glad you enjoyed it. I hope that I can bring many more of these once they come to me. Untill my next one I hope everyone enjoys this one.

PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:38 am
by Marius the Black
You remind me of Adonis.

-M

PostPosted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 3:59 pm
by Wolfie
Marius the Black wrote:You remind me of Adonis.

-M

but he's not so old :twisted:

PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 4:32 pm
by Ehran
if he's this good at tugging female heartstrings at this age he oughta come with a warning label :wink:

Re: Is this Love?

PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 1:47 am
by Bayn
Henry Longshanks wrote:... "Is this Love?" he thinks to himself. He risks a kiss, and is rewarded with one of the most passionate moments of his life. Yes, this is love, a love that will never falter. The kiss ends, and they are both dizzy with their love for each other....


Hmmmm, sounds like overactive hormonal glands to me. But it might be love. Hard to say at this point. Extensive research in a controlled laboratory environment is probably best.

That dizziness can be dangerous, especially if you are driving a vehicle. Don't drive and kiss for (at least) two reasons. 1) If you do it properly you HAVE to take your eyes off the road. 2) Dizziness.

He reminds me of Adonis also except the stuff Adonis wrote would give you cavities just reading it. Not to say there is not definite tooth decay potential here, of course.

'nuff said.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 5:43 am
by Herakles
Nice writing Henry!!!!

Herakles